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This replacement text for QS $101 is closely related to GA
$$75-6 (p. 35); and since on its reverse side is a rejected draft for the
replacement annal for the year 116 in GA ($$111-13, pp. 44 - 5),
also concerned with Gondolin, it is clear that my father was
working on the story of the origins of Nargothrond and Gondolin
in both the Silmarillion and the Annals at the same time. See further
pp. 198 ff.
$102. At the beginning of this paragraph a sub-heading Of Dagor
Aglareb was pencilled on the manuscript, but this was not taken up
in either typescript.
'the Blue Mountains' > 'Eredluin, the blue mountains'
the second great battle > the third great battle: see p. 116, $77.

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A few corrections were made to one or the other, or to both, of the
copies of LQ 2. In addition to those listed below, Inglor was changed
to Finrod, and Finrod to Finarphin or Finarfin, throughout.
$92. Tuna > Tirion
$98. '(the feud) was healed' > 'was assuaged'
$99. 'Dark-elves of Telerian race' > 'Dark-elves, the Sindar of
Telerian race'.
$100. At the beginning of this paragraph my father inserted a new
chapter number and title: XIII The Founding of Nargothrond and
Gondolin; and the next chapter, Of Beleriand and its Realms, was
given in LQ 2 the number XIV.
Nivrost > Nevrast (and subsequently); the first appearance of the
later form of the name (its appearance in the later Tale of Tuor was
by editorial change).
$101 Against the name Felagund my father wrote this note: 'This
was in fact a Dwarfish name; for Nargothrond was first made by
Dwarves as is later recounted.' An important constituent text

among the Narn papers is a 'plot-outline' that begins with Turin's
flight from Doriath and moves towards pure narrative in a long
account of Turin's relations with Finduilas and Gwindor in
Nargothrond (which with some editorial development was given in
Unfinished Tales, pp. 155-9). In this text the following is said of
Mim the Petty-dwarf:
Mim gets a certain curious liking for Turin, increased when he
learns that Turin has had trouble with Elves, whom he detests. He
says Elves have caused the end of his race, and taken all their
mansions, especially Nargothrond (Nulukhizidun).
Above this Dwarvish name my father wrote Nulukkhizdin (this
name was used, misspelt, in The Silmarillion, p. 230).
$104. Glomund > Glaurung. At the head of the page in QS my
father wrote 'Glaurung for Glomund', but the LQ typescript, as
typed, has Glomund - whereas Glaurung appears already in the
Grey Annals as written.