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named, for it lay between the Sea and the walls of the echoing
mountains of the Eryd Lomin. And even as the Noldor set foot
upon the strand their cries were taken up into the hills and
multiplied, so that a great clamour as of countless mighty voices
filled all the coasts of the North; and it is said that the noise of the
burning of the ships at Losgar went down the winds of the Sea as
a tumult of great wrath, and far away all that heard that sound
were filled with wonder.
Under the cold stars before the rising of the Moon Feanor and
his folk marched eastward, and they passed the Eryd Lomin, and
came into the great land of Hithlum, and crossing the country of
Dor-lomin they came at length to the long lake of Mithrim, and
upon its north-shore they made their first camp in that region
which was called by the like name.
There a host of the Orcs, aroused by the tumult of Lammoth,
and the light of the burning at Losgar, came down upon them;
and beside the waters of Mithrim was fought the first battle upon
Middle-earth...

This is the story of Lammoth told (at about this same time) in the
later Tale of Tuor (Unfinished Tales p. 23):
Tuor was now come to the Echoing Mountains of Lammoth
about the Firth of Drengist. There once long ago Feanor had
landed from the sea, and the voices of his host were swelled to a
mighty clamour upon the coasts of the North ere the rising of the
Moon.
On the much later and apparently distinct story that Lammoth was
so called because the echoes of Morgoth's cry were awakened by
'any who cried aloud in that land' see X.296, $17 and commentary,
and Unfinished Tales p. 52. Both 'traditions' were incorporated in
the published Silmarillion, pp. 80-1, 106.
At the end of this paragraph my father pencilled on the manu-
script: 'He [Feanor] gives the green stone to Maidros', but then
noted that this was not in fact to be inserted; see under $97 below.
$90. 'and they were unwilling to depart, whatever he might do' >
'... whatever he might do, being held by their oath.' This addition is
not present in LQ 1; while the typist of LQ 2, unable to read the first
word, put 'They held by their oath', and this was allowed to stand.
Cf. GA $50.

$91. 'the Sun rose flaming in the West' > 'the Sun rose flaming above
the shadows' (not in LQ 1).
'and good was made of evil, as happens still' removed.
$93. 'the bright airs of those earliest of mornings' > 'the bright airs in
the first mornings of the world.'
$94. A subheading was pencilled in the margin at the beginning of
this paragraph: Of Fingon and Maedros (apparently first written
Maidros: see p. 115, $61). Not found in LQ 1, this was incorpor-
ated in LQ 2.
In the second sentence 'most renowned' > 'most honoured' (not